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Ruthless People

Ruthless People - J.J. McAvoy DNF @ 42%. July 23, 2014.

This is an honest and highly subjective review, proceed with caution. You have been warned.


The blurb was promising and I loved ruthless heroine.

BUT...

* Regardless I was warned earlier, I still want to say it. Too fucking many 'fuck', 'motherfucking' word my stomach felt motherfucking full of it I wanted to fucking vomit. There.
* Both main characters are immature people stuck in their grown body.
* Some hot sex scenes, I'm cool but too much of it, boring.
* The editing was a mess.
* The writing style isn't to my liking.

I don't mind violence, dark, and twisted in a story because there's a part of me that is sadist but to impress me, this book has got to be much better than it is. I for one care naught it was a Twilight fanfiction but as long as the idea is there and really, it has potential.

Yes, I'm always the Beta reader. Where most readers like this book and I happened to not like it. Sorry, it wasn't for me.

Read on your own peril.